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What dose it mean to be human? I think humanity is human nature. To be human is to have human qualities like feelings, for exaple love, hatered, happyness, anger, or sadness. Every human feels these emotions differntly and some more than others, or not at all. Everyone is uniquie and has a diffrent personallity. A personallity is what seperates people from each other mentaly. Human nature is what makes people want to fit in to a group and to be diffrent from others. Sometimes there are behaviors that people cant explain and it may be human nature.

Hi Celeste,

You have a strong argument, however, you paragraph would benefit from more structure to get your point across. Start with a strong opening sentence that will state what you are going to talk about which is emotions, uniqueness and personality. What exactly do you mean by human in human nature? You also need clear and specific examples to support your thoughts.

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Ms. D'Angelo